Every now and then, we do get emails and the like from dad around the world and often they ask us to come up with great speeches that will make them respected by the audience and make their sons very proud.
When John requested such help we had no option but to help him do justice to his speech. After being told his speech was the best, we asked for his consent to showcase it here so you too can get a fair idea of what really goes into such speeches.
I have tried to analyze it by adding comments to help you write your own speech. But, if you still feel you want us to help you make an impact as he did, please talk to us here. Thanks
I’m John, Dan’s dad and it gives me great joy and honor to see the smiling faces of so many people who love and cherish my son and the entire family.
We have waited for months for this special time and would like to thank everyone, especially Michelle’s family, who has flown all the way from South Africa to share in our joy and happiness.
(comment: On this same blog, I taught about the need to start your speech with a short self-introduction and that’s exactly what the writer did. Can you point out the elements that he used….ok, here they are: his name and his relationship to the groom as well as saying some kind words about the bride’s family. You better use that same technique when writing your own speech)
Back in 1980, when Dan, our precious little gem was born, we were the happiest parents on earth.
Very determined to be one of the greatest parents ever, we would spend, what seemed like hours, just adoring and playing with the precious gift God had blessed me with.
What was in store for him for the rest of his life, of course, we just couldn’t figure out.
Comment: What can you say about the above ideas? Well, i also added on this same blog that you need to always come up with a great intro..and the writer masterfully kick starts his speech by capturing the attention of the guests when he says: Back in 1980, when Dan, our precious little gem was born…
He employs the story telling approach of engaging the audience from the onset…hope that’s food for thought)
But, I had a dream that someday, Dan would grow up into a happy, loving, loyal, responsible, and compassionate human being.
But, I knew it was our responsibility to make that happen
since what you give back to your children is what they give back to the world.
And so we gave him unconditional love, hoping that he, too, would share his love with others.
Watching Dan mature into a fine young man like a fragrant flower in bloom as the years whizzed by was my greatest joy ever.
(comment: Having got their attention, you need to serve them the main course…here; you talk about your son from birth to when he was a young man and try as much as you can to include how you felt when he was growing up!)
Dan, I stand here in front of you today, the proudest dad that ever lived because you are fulfillment of our cherished dreams.
Deep down in my heart, I know I have done my very best to be your dad. Being your dad is a joy and privilege and I want you to know I love you so much.
But, as you are pretty much aware, there are so many decisions the most caring dad can’t make for his son no matter the depth of his love.
And so, I prayed and hoped that you would act like a sage every step of the way.
(comment: The writer still goes on to comment about how he felt…that’s not enough though because you need to integrate those emotions with sentiments on the wedding day)
When you became best friends with Amanda, I had this comforting assurance that you had met the love of your life and I’m so excited that you’ve found such a dignified woman.
And to you Amanda, we are thankful that you agreed to marry Adam. If there were ever one person in this entire world I could pick for him, it would be you and only you. We are blessed that you now are a part of our family and we know you’re going to be an amazing wife seeing you’re a thoughtful, sensitive and loving person as well.
On this note, I’d like to welcome you into our family with open arms and we know that the new bonds of friendship forged will wax stronger in the years ahead.
(comment: having said a few words about your son, you have to say something brief about your daughter-in-law and that’s exactly what this writer has done…here, you can dwell on her qualities, how you felt when you met her and ways she’s a good match for your son)
What makes me even more excited for both of you is the fact you both have this keen sense of humor that will help a great deal when difficulties arise.
Your marriage like all others will certainly have its share of conflict, frustration, boredom, un-resolvable arguments, slammed doors and even nights when one person sleeps on the couch and the other on the bed but what I want you to bear in mind is that we don’t worry marry the person we can live with.
Rather, we marry the person we can’t live without.
So, you have to let go quickly if you find yourselves entangled in that situation.
Guess what? The smartest investor that ever lived will tell you over and over again that all kinds of investments options can be very risky.
But, that’s not the case when you decide to invest in loving each other till the end of time. Loving each other each day of your lives like there’s no tomorrow is the fail-proof investment every couple can ever make given that love never fails.
Yes, it never fails.
So, always invest your time and energies in making each other happy. In making each other laugh when times are tough and in making each other feel loved.
Unconditional love will keep your souls very much intact and alive and will also be your safety net you have an empty nest.
I look forward to a life of pure joy for both of you and I want you to experience life to the fullest.
I look forward to babies (if that’s in the cards), and babies, babies.
Never mind if they are uncountable as the stars because I will be there to give them my boundless love and support.
God bless you and I wish you the very best.
(comment: I guess you now know how great speeches are written…I’d like to say that you have to share an advice…if you don’t feel like doing that, you can simply wish them well before you propose your toast)
P.S: Want to write and give a great wedding speech like the one above but can't seem to get started because you don't know the exact words to use?
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Here’s what one nervous and skeptical dad called Glen sent over after the wedding was over
Hey Dan, just wanted to thank you once again for the speech you wrote with me. My goal was met afterwards, I was told by many "what a beautiful speech" and received a standing ovation. I couldn't have did this without you. God Bless Dan!- Glen, U.S.A
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' It went extremely well thanks. Many compliments.''- Dennis, Australia
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''The wedding was GREAT. There were about 120 guests. About 15 people came up to me afterwards and told me I gave a great speech. I had to tweak it little because of my tardiness getting it to you but, it all turned out great. Thanks for all your help. I really appreciate it''- Phil Australia